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Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Sure i have no problems with that, also, i won't be posting any more of this story until i finish part 1, or showing what i have edited, it can ...
Mar 8, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Thanks for the help for that first part, there should be less mistakes further through the story because it was written over a long period of time in which my ...
Mar 7, 2005 -
Re: The Real World
Nooooooo! you weren't supposed to read this Neonshorty...... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: The Quest
Great story, it needs a bit of work, and i'm not completely sure, but i think it's spelt 'unic', correct me if i'm wrong ~~Shadow~Knight~~
Mar 3, 2005 -
Re: The Chronicles of Taer
Great story, try to remember to put "'s in the right places, other than that, i really am looking forward to reading chapter 2, which im about to do.
Mar 3, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
There we go, thats how its supposed to be, remind me, NEVER USE THE 'Pre' BUTTON EVER AGAIN!
Mar 3, 2005 -
Re: The World's First Ostrich (written in 2002)
Misty Lynn, misty lynn, where have i heard that name before? Ok back to your story, it was good, but i think you should make the race a little bit ...
Mar 2, 2005 -
Re: The Real World
Ok ok, let me clear up a few things, 1 i don't write poems professionaly, i just write one every now and then, i actually write short stories and novels. ...
Mar 2, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
It was supposed to be seperated into paragraphs, oh well, thanks for the comment, i'll read your story now
Mar 2, 2005
