Shadow Knight

Sure i have no problems with that, also, i won't be posting any more of this story until i finish part 1, or showing what i have edited, it can ...

Thanks for the help for that first part, there should be less mistakes further through the story because it was written over a long period of time in which my ...

Nooooooo! you weren't supposed to read this Neonshorty...... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Great story, it needs a bit of work, and i'm not completely sure, but i think it's spelt 'unic', correct me if i'm wrong ~~Shadow~Knight~~

Great story, try to remember to put "'s in the right places, other than that, i really am looking forward to reading chapter 2, which im about to do.

There we go, thats how its supposed to be, remind me, NEVER USE THE 'Pre' BUTTON EVER AGAIN!

Misty Lynn, misty lynn, where have i heard that name before? Ok back to your story, it was good, but i think you should make the race a little bit ...

Ok ok, let me clear up a few things, 1 i don't write poems professionaly, i just write one every now and then, i actually write short stories and novels. ...

It was supposed to be seperated into paragraphs, oh well, thanks for the comment, i'll read your story now